Mingling and tingling, I see so many pairs
Looking at them, I wonder when their desire will flare
I can see that they are made for each other
But the youngsters have no clue what it is about
I turn to see and look around
If the one for me is in this vicinity and crowd
But it seems like there are too many "one's" for me
Or maybe not the one I am looking for
The fallicious crowd can lead you astray but,
The key is to look for the one
That penetrates you straight away
Now who might that be...
Where is the one that my eyes search for?
Is it the one in the blue or the one in white
I know...it is the one with the rainbow stripes
Who will bring the colors to brighten my life
Time is slipping by...tick-tock-tick
I ponder if my time will ever come
When I am part of that pair
Who everyone sees as "They are meant to be"
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13 comments:
Keep looking.... Somebody is surely gonna cross ur way. All the best :))
WHO ARE YOU WAVES?
I LOOOOOVE UR POOOOEMMM!!!
it makes me all MUSHYYY
and feely insiiideeeeeeeeee
i feel the penetrationnnnn
Will you be ma franshap?
Hi Enchantress,
I love your work. It warms my soul.
BYE!
Nimboo Babe says:
don't laugh at your work :) It's beautiful :)
i love you!
you complete me!
Too many things to say... you might just think I am critisizing again... so, no comments for this time... :)
Wish I could marry you :-)
whoever you are anonymous...thanks for the compliment...it is the sweetest ever! :)
Does it matter who I am? @ Tissue? :))
and the search continues. far away in another corner of the world. every hour, every day. in search of a pair of eyes that smell just like mine.
really tell me what were you writing
A poem or a prose with trimmed lines
your idea was conveyed but then the flow of the poem the rhyming structure and all that Hmmm got to read some good poems girl
but again it would have so romantic if it were done with a finer tocuh , and as ur eyes from ur pics are haunting dont worry some one will fall very soon
"Wish I could marry you :-)" ?!
ahem ahem... at this rate u'd probably have grandkids by the time ur 24!
heheee :D
moving sentiments with lots of yearning! :)
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